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I don't like this, actually. Not just that it lacks of impact as usual, but it's like the effects are jammed up together.

I thought this was an interesting scene, where the two she-cats have their afterlife in StarClan; prologue of Sunrise (NOT SUNSET)
It's not a pretty scene, but StarClan hunting ground is supposed to be heaven where everything is sparkly and kewl.

Lol, if I was dead and was a StarClan warrior, I would just sit around and do nothing, because I don't care xD

I'm not sure if Yellowfang is bigger than Bluestar, idk...
I sketched the whole thing before looking up a very useful source typing "cats fighting" on google... 

I read the prologue over and over and don't get why Yellowfang was mad at Bluestar. Was Bluestar the only one who let the secret... into ThunderClan? huh/
I mean, Leafpool made that secret for herself, and StarClan seems to be completely fine with it.



Was Yellowfang mad because she broke the warrior code (not wanting to), like Leafpool, but got punished terribly, unlike Leafpool? 
please critique about the anatomy